I've been standing here for 2 hours now trying to open this box. Because if I don't it will blow up on me. Literally that thing has a bomb in it. Click!
"Yes!" I put my hand in the box and felt 7 pieces of dynamite and a timer. I immediately ripped it out and started to pick at the timer. I opened it up and saw three wires. Red, blue and white. My mind raced for the answer. 3...2 I cut the blue one and...1. My face turned pale.
"crud." Boom!
Very creative story. Don't you think the dynamites would already explode by 2 hours? You could run away from it to save yourself by the time two hours past. Instead of waiting for and answer I would cut all the wires.
ReplyDeleteHaha! I like the ending! I think you could have added some more descriptive language, And remember you need a new line when ever some one speaks .
ReplyDeleteIn all very creative! :)
Very creative story I like your descriptive sentences. Great job.
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