Thursday, February 11, 2016
week 6
"Yeah yeah!" I'm ugly. Crooked nose, stick out teeth, and pimples everywhere! My older brother annoys me by reminding me that I'm 26 and I still don't have a girlfriend. Can you blame me! Anyway teaching a whole class of 2nd graders isn't easy either adding the fact that I am also a substitute doesn't help. I think you can guess why. I remember tutoring a girl named stacey last christmas. Man was she shocked to see me for the first time. But don't feel bad when I feel down I always have wifi! P.S I have a sad life :(
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I like your story really funny I like your description about how you look.
ReplyDeleteit is a very sad but descriptive story! Though you do need commas when you are naming things of, " Crooked nose stick out teeth and pimples everywhere!"
ReplyDeletethat is where you need the commas.
I very different take on your story this week. I am somewhat confused and wondering how the different parts of your story are connected. For example, how does the tutoring at Christmas play an important part in your story? It seems to lack a story with a beginning, middle and end, but rather and description of the character.
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