Wednesday, January 27, 2016

week 4

Great just great. This mourning I lost my test so I got an incomplete. At noon I accidentally reset my dad's computer! I may have been complaining about it then but later that day I was in for a big surprise. I was having a normal morning at least that's what I thought. Suddenly a certain sibling of mine burst through the door wearing nothing but his shirt and "jockeys." My reaction was 3 options: Fight flight or freeze knowing me I took the first option. So now I'm grounded in my room for giving my little brother a red streak across his back.   
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5 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 27, 2016 at 6:21 PM

    your story is great! but I think in the beginning you should start the sentence a little more powerful. otherwise your story has good punchuation. good luck!

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  2. UnknownJanuary 28, 2016 at 1:33 PM

    Haha! it's a very creative story! I think you could give more detail in the beginning. Also you said Mourning instead of morning, I think you knew that so thats all i would day to change.

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  3. TiggerJanuary 28, 2016 at 1:36 PM

    very funny never heard that story but you spelt a word wrong so what do you mean by a red streak across his back

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  4. TiggerJanuary 28, 2016 at 1:37 PM

    also why was it high lighted white why not white letters

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  5. UnknownJanuary 30, 2016 at 8:45 PM

    Very funny story but I think mourning is suppose to be spelled like morning

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