"Do I have to go?" I whined.
"Of course son!" dad replied "good exercise for those legs!"
I groan and in my head I think. "But this mountain is like a million kilometers!"
Then I sigh "Goody goody hurray."
Halfway up the mountain and my face is already red. Good thing I brought an umbrella with me or I would've been drenched! Suddenly I step on something hard. I realized it was some sort of mineral. But not an ordinary one. I mean it floated in the puddle. I wonder...as I take out my toy spider.
"Hey dad can I see your water bottle?"
I don't really understand the end
ReplyDeleteClean up the ending little confused
ReplyDeleteI agree with colin and ryan the ending doesn't make sense. Make it flow better. Good use of words.
ReplyDeleteim really confused at the end why did you take out a toy spider for no reason
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