All from 1 lousy bet. I lost so now into that haunted house. I bought the tickets and as I joined the queue my friend taunts me.
"Good luck!" he smirks. I entered the building already regretting my decision. I walk down the gloomy hallway and as a sharp turn was made a man in a clown suit appears in my face.
"Screech!" In that moment of my life I screamed so loud that I probably shattered all the window in the building. The trauma caused me to stay in bed for the whole weekend. I will never go back in there.
Great story I saw alot of I's but other then that your story was great.
ReplyDeleteI really like the idea and creativity of your story. Your story has a lot of I's, instead of saying I did this, I did that you could say me or some other words you can think of, just try to replace those I's with something else.
ReplyDeleteI really like ur story you had a lo of I's but I have nothing else to say it was a really cretive idea
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