Wednesday, March 2, 2016
week 9
I was feeling a bit gassy that day anyway. Was that bean and pickle pizza pop the reason I'm here? It did say highly radioactive. Anyway now I'm the protecter of this city fartropolis. Filling the skies with the knock out gas from my bottom. Hold that thought it's my arch enemy Dr. Clean with his magical soap. I charge towards him my bottom locked and loaded. 3 2 1 fire! The knockout gas explodes through the city, I'm victorious! Although we have a slight problem. All the citizens are asleep as well.
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I did such a good job. Enjoy the story!
ReplyDeleteThe beginning doesn't flow very well. You used some words that I don't understand. One more thing, what do you mean when you say I'm feeling gassy? Oh ya,when you say 3,2,1, there should be commas.
ReplyDeleteweek 9 - An original idea for this weeks prompt. After introductory words like anyway or although you need a comma. Be sure to use the feedback given to you by your peers. I also find the first two lines confusing to read. I had to read them twice to make sure I understood what you were trying to say.
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